Kiora Miss walsh
on the weekend I stayed the night at my grandma's house with my cousin vadim At midnight we played Five Nights at Freddy's 4 on the tablet we got jump scared by nightmare foxy it made me jump My cousin nearly wet his pants no jokes. in the morning my mum came to pick me up and my cousin came then he stayed the night at my house we played on the tramp it started to rain so we got into our togs and went on the tramp in the rain it started to get dark so we got into our pj’s and went to bed in the morning we dropped him off and went to the park
Goodbye
From davin
Hi Davin, My name is Brooklyn I from Red Hill School. I like staying at my Grandmas house in the weekends too. Remember to reread your story and add full stops. Please becareful on the tramp in the wet.
ReplyDeletetrue ones i was on a wet tramp and broke my hand
DeleteHi Davin, my name is Kingston I go to Red Hill School.My granparents live with me but my aunty has a trampoline.I like to jump on it with dishwashing liquid did you put some on?
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DeleteHi Davin,
ReplyDeleteI like this peace of writing.
Hope to hear back :)
-Emma